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cool!

I like it. I used to do a little 3D stuff, but wasn't very good at it. I like the effect of the glasses shattering, although they probably would need alot more force to make them shatter. I know you mentioned that the physics were a little off, but if you could, I'd just make them move a little faster when they're breaking each other. I'd also improve the lighting on the credits. Good luck with that animaion class.

Irken101 responds:

thanks a lot

could be better

The voice acting was great, you did a good job on that. However, the graphics and animation need some work and the joke could be improved on. Keep practicing though!

Kethizzle responds:

Thanks! I appreciate the advice and honesty.

I agree it's crappy animation and a dumb joke, but I'm just satisfied I submitted something.

Nice one!

Awesome madness movie! I liked. and wow, 215 layers? I couln't immagine having to work with that many. Impressive.

JordanKinsley responds:

its hard... lol thanks for the review

good work!

I like your animations, but you might want to improve voice acting. I also think the mouth looked a little wierd, but that's not too important. Overall though, i thought it was decent.

TechFlash responds:

thanks!

not bad.

needs work, though. You should make it longer, and maybe a bigger screen? and some more sound effects. But overall, not too bad.

bulletspitter responds:

il work on that

Perfect

I love your series! This is probably my favorite. Keep it up, these are hilarious!

Cambo responds:

That hurts me, that really hurts me.

"Hahaha, wow" - Enoll

needs a little work, but still good.

The storyline was interesting and well written, but you might want to work on the animation a bit, especially with the character's arms. overall though, It wasn't bad.

JakeX responds:

Oh its the arms :D well....what can i say i was a lazy bastard at that time, haha know what i mean?

Nah i created this about 1 and half years ago and just started up again....from about scene 5 and onwards i was on flash 8 doing well haha

thanks again

cool!

I haven't seen your other cartoons in this series, but I may have to. This was really good! the fighting was really cool. Keep it up!

Roaltyx responds:

thank you

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